Sunday, September 14, 2008

Lord of the Flies Post #2

Chapter 2: Some one, shut piggy up!

2=Jack



"Okay so it's all agreed we are going to make a signal fire on top of that mountain". Said Ralph, "Now for whoever wants to speak up is going to have to hold the conch and I'll pass it to whoever raise there hand that wants to talk". Said Ralph. Great now there are more rules, man i should have been leader and I will. "Excuse me Ralph I have some thing that you guys should hear that is very odd". Said Piggy. Now the fat one wants to waste our time with his dumb stories. "Now look here piggy we don't you to waste our time with your lame stories we got a fire to make." said Jack. It's not me who wants to talk its him the little boy so if you'll stop being so errant and listen to what he has to say." said piggy. "Ok.. w-well it was during night an-and I saw a snake like beastie." said the little boy. "He is probably martyred from a nightmare he dreamt before to today, why don't you go back to capering with you friends little boy." So first we got all the wood but how do you make a fire." said Ralph. "I know how." said Jack "Jack what are you doi-hey give me back my specs you guys pinched my specs!" said Piggy "Okay guys move out of the light while I light this fire." said Ralph with an officious feeling. Yes it lit, but now all we need is smoke. " How come there wasn't any smoke." said Jack " I think there wasn't enough green wood." said piggy. "We didn't ask for your opinion." said jack now all we need is green smoke.

1 comment:

Michael said...

1. I like how you kind of remixed the quotes in the story to fit Jacks personality. I like how you dont mention Jack alot because your trying to show what other people are doing.